Year 6 Homework – 13.11.20
Hi Year 6
Only one blog task for you this week.
Have a look at the picture below:
Write a story or a diary about what is happening in this picture.
Remember to include lots of description and a range of punctuation.
See you on Monday and have a great weekend.
Miss Kinsella
Hello Miss Kinsella
This is my diary
Dear Diary
I woke up in a strange place. I think it was under the sea. I was shocked. I could swim I have never been under water. It was so beautiful. I saw a bunch of sea but not one kind. I saw 5 different types of fish and a school of sardines. There was something strange I could breath under water. I took swimming lessons but I couldn’t breath. I think this was a mystical world no one had ever seen before. It was amazing! Then I saw a dangerous jellyfish it was coming towards me…
See you on Monday
Jaynelle
Well done Jaynelle.
Dear diary ,
I was on a tiny island but suddenly I saw a big no vast shape at the bottom …..
When I looked it seemed to have dissapered As weird as it was I saw it again .Was I dreaming ๐ญ So I went under the water with a flash light ๐ก with loads of fish swimming ๐โโ๏ธ around me .๐๐ ๐ก๐๐๐ฆ๐ฌ๐ณ
Well done Evie.
I was shocked ? I was terrified ? I didnโt know what was happening was I a ghost or was I just magical? I was confused my ship just crashed how am I just living right now ? did I jump into a lake ?how did I save myself ?mother father where are they? do they know? Iโm not sure? am I danger to the world so then I ran off like a coward Not facing my fears.
Well done Tanisa! Don’t forget your capital letters.
If you use punctuation from a planet can you move up
Can we move up the planets in our homework this week
We are going to wait until Friday this week when we do our independent writing.
Dear Diary,
Traumatic, thatโs how this day has been ,I woke up in the morning underwater was I dead or a fairy. The shiver in my bone were severe,I am so scared, I need help.
If anyone actually gets this.Will you send help?
There were so many fishes around me I turned around and there was a shark about to bite my toe off.
Donโt get me started on the fishermen in that area I was almost caught with there hook I wanted to grab the hand ,I was see through so I wonder how the shark could see me.
I think I drowned but I donโt know if u are a ghost and reading my diary donโt read page 46 but just send help!!!
HELP HELP HELP HELP HELP!!
P.S I am writing underwater
Fantastic! Well done Aamirat!