Tuesday 16th June – Year 5

Good morning Pankhurst Class – I hope that you and your families are all well and keeping safe.

I saw some lovely chocolate wrapper designs yesterday and many of you are working very hard on your English and Maths tasks – well done.

Here are today’s tasks:

Grammar

Last week we started looking at colons and semi-colons and you completed some independent work on semi-colons on Friday. I would therefore like you to focus on colons today. Here are the 2 links that you looked at last week if you need a quick reminder:

https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/topics/zs4qn39/articles/z4k2xyc

 

 

Here are some examples of colons in sentences and an explanation of how and why they have been used:

Now try this on your own:

Writing


I want you to think about the characters in the Charlie and the Chocolate Factory book. Here is a list of them if you can’t remember:

https://www.gradesaver.com/charlie-and-the-chocolate-factory/study-guide/character-list

Personally, I thought that Augustus Gloop, the Oompa Loompas and Violet Beauregarde were hilarious!

I want you to create your own new character to join these on their adventures to the factory. You will need to think about the following:

  • What is their name? (Often this is linked to their personality)
  • How do they behave/act?
  • What do they look like?
  • Will their parents (or other relatives) be joining them in the factory and tell me about them too.
  • What happens to them in the factory?
  • How does their journey end? Do they follow the same fate as Veruca Salt or Augustus Gloop?

Please write  a character profile for your new character, thinking about the above. I would absolutely love to see a picture of them if you could e mail that.

Maths

We looked at some chocolate themed word problems yesterday and I think we should have one more practice at a few more.

Try these:

 

Music

I’d like you to follow this Music lesson which looks at pulse and rhythm in music – let me know what you think.

https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/to-identify-pulse-and-rhythm-in-music/activities/1/

Remember that if you are feeling a little anxious about anything then I am here to talk – you can e mail me if you prefer. I miss talking to you all in person but we’ll have to do the best we can for a while longer.

Take care,
Mrs Millard and Mrs Munro XX

 

36 thoughts on “Tuesday 16th June – Year 5

  • 16th June 2020 at 10:29 am
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    Grammar
    1. Swimming in something my entire family is obsessed with : we are all fantastic swimmers.
    2. I have everything ready for dance class : now im just waiting for my constructor.
    3.She grinned: from ear to ear happiness.
    4.Don’t forget to do your homework this weekend handwriting ,grammar and maths.
    5. At the seaside waves crashed noisily at the shore:the storm has wiped a fenzy sea foam.
    6. Jordens art work was a hit: she has finished tremendously at high standards.
    7.No one dared to say a word:frozen in fear.

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    • 16th June 2020 at 1:49 pm
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      Who is this from?

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 10:36 am
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    Morning Mrs Millard,
    I done my music I loved it , it was really fun , I really liked the Romeo and Juliet music and the stomp music

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    • 16th June 2020 at 1:50 pm
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      Well done Jessica – I’m glad you liked it!

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 10:52 am
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    I’d like to introduce bubble gum she is bubbly by name and bubbly by nature, bubblegum is always happy she skips and sings everywhere she goes ! If you ever see bubblegum you will notice shes always in bright and colourful clothes . Bubble gum is very polite she always says her pleases and thank yous .bubble gums nan is coming because she wants to eat at the choclate and sweets because she has a very sweet tooth .when bubble gum arrives at the factory with her beautiful nan they gaze upon a vast building made from choclate and brightly coloured seeets my favoiute parts where the windows and doors they were made out of oreos !bubble gum eats to much candy floss and her hair turns into a big buffy pile of pink and purple candy floss, atleast it suits her personality …🍭🍨🍧🧁

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    • 16th June 2020 at 1:53 pm
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      Hi Evie,

      I love your character of ‘Bubblegum’ – shouldn’t her name begin with a capital letter?

      She sounds like an outrageous character. I loved the doors made out of Oreos and the details about her personality.

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 11:23 am
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    Morning Mrs Millard,
    Writing ✍️
    Name:Amelia Tomas
    How she behave: sassy
    Will there parents be joining her?: yes they are called Sophia Tomas and William Tomas
    The mum is sassy like her daughter and the dad is the rich one of the family so they are like Veruca salt family
    What happens to her at the factory: Amelia steals all the sweets and gets fat and sticky and gets made into a big sweet by accident

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    • 16th June 2020 at 1:55 pm
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      Hi Jessica,

      Thank you for this.

      Don’t forget to use full stops at the end of sentences. Spelling – there/their???

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 11:57 am
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    1. 1204
    2. 120
    3. £6.10
    4. £ 4.65
    5. £3
    6. 1226g
    7. £4.45
    8. £5
    9. £1.49
    10. 781

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    • 16th June 2020 at 1:56 pm
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      Hi Dhanshri,

      Very well done – all correct!

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 12:00 pm
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    1.1220cupcakes
    2.96 eggs
    3.£3.90p
    4.£4.65p
    5.£1.25p
    6.781more cupcakes
    7.in my apinyan you would save more getting a large cake in happy hour than getting a medium cake on a normal Day because you get1/3%off
    8.each of them would pay £5 each
    9.4.45

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    • 16th June 2020 at 1:59 pm
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      Hi Gracie,

      Great effort. Questions I and 4 are correct – check 2, 3 and 5.
      Question 6 should have been an answer in grams.
      Question 7 – have you mixed this up with question 9?

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 12:05 pm
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    Good Morning Mrs Millard,
    Here is my maths for today.
    1. 1114
    2. 120
    3. 610
    4. £4.65
    5. £3
    6. 1226g
    7. £4.45
    8. £5
    9. £1.49
    10. 781

    I had another go at the questions I got wrong yesterday.
    6. 337g
    7. £224
    8. 2102

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    • 16th June 2020 at 2:02 pm
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      Hi Lydia,

      Great work today – all correct except question 1.

      Brilliant correcting work – question 6 was 337.5g – so close!

      Very well done – you are getting very confident with these word problems.

      Mrs Millard XX

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      • 16th June 2020 at 2:10 pm
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        I have struggled with them but I’ve had a little bit of help.

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        • 16th June 2020 at 4:53 pm
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          That’s good – is it Mum or Dad that’s the good mathematician? (That’s one of our spelling words!)

          Remember that I’m here to help if I can.

          You’ve done brilliantly – well done.

          Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 12:33 pm
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    Swimming is something my entire family is obsessed with;we are all exceptional swimmers!
    I have everything ready: for dance class now ;I am just waiting for my instructor.
    she grinned :from ear to ear ;happynis.
    Don’t forget to compete your homework:this week; handwriting, grammar and maths!
    At the seaside the waves crashed noisily: agents the shore the storm had whipped up a frenzy; of sea form!
    Jorda’s art project was a hit: she had finished with tremendously; high standards!
    Now one:derd to say a word;frozen in fear

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    • 16th June 2020 at 2:06 pm
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      Hi Gracie,

      Remember that we were focussing on colons today – they look like this :
      The first four are in the correct place but you used ;
      Question 5 – the : should go after ‘shore’.
      Question 6 – no semi-colon needed.
      7 – where you used the semi-colon.

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 12:41 pm
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    Swimming: is something my entire family is obsessed with we ate all exceptional swimmers.

    I have everything ready for dance class: now I’m just waiting for my instructor.

    She grinned: from ear to ear.

    Don’t forget to complete your homework this weekend: handwriting, grammar and maths.

    At the seaside the waves crashed noisily against the shore: the storm had whipped up a frenzy of sea form.

    Jordan’s art project: was a hit she had finished with tremendously high standard.

    No one dared: to say a word frozen in fear.

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    • 16th June 2020 at 2:07 pm
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      Hi Dhanshri,

      Thank you for this. Double check sentences 1, 6 and 7.

      Mrs Millard XX

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      • 16th June 2020 at 6:21 pm
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        1. Swimming is something my family is obsessed which: we are all exceptional swimmers.

        6. Jordan’s art project was a hit: she had finished with tremendously high standards.

        7. No one dared to say a word: frozen in fear.

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        • 17th June 2020 at 10:07 am
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          Well corrected Dhanshri.

          Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 12:50 pm
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    writing
    my own character is smart about chocolate .He listen he is kind helpful ; He always wanted to work at a factory but because it was a chocolate factory he was even happier .

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  • 16th June 2020 at 1:56 pm
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    Maths
    1. There were 549 cupcakes
    2. There is 2 eggs left
    3. The change will be £6.90.
    4. The change will be £4.65.
    5. The change will be£3.
    6. 874g are left
    7. It cost 17. 80
    8. It cost 24.55
    9. I did not get it
    10. I did not get it

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    • 16th June 2020 at 4:57 pm
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      A great effort Alex.

      Questions 4 and 5 are correct.

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 2:06 pm
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    Grammar
    1. Swimming is something my entire family is obsessed with: we are all exceptional swimmers.
    2. I have everything ready for dance class now: I am just waiting for my instructor.
    3. She grinned: from ear to ear happiness.
    4. Don’t forget to complete your homework this weekend: handwriting, grammar and maths.
    5. At the seaside the waves crashed noisily against the shore: the storm had whipped up a frenzy of sea form.
    6. Jordin’s art project was a hit: she had finished with tremendously high standards.
    7. No one dared to say a word: frozen in air.

    My mum has emailed my character and drawing.

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    • 16th June 2020 at 5:01 pm
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      Hi Lydia,

      Great use of colons. Sentence 3 – it should be after ‘ear’. Have you ever heard of the saying ‘grinning from ear to ear’?

      I got your e mail – thank you.

      Well done. Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 2:08 pm
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    Hi Alex,

    Does your character have a name?
    Have you described his appearance?

    Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 2:47 pm
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    English:
    1.Swimming: is something my entire family is obsessed with we are all exceptional swimmers.
    2. I have everything ready for dance class: now I’m just waiting for my instructor.
    3. She grinned:from ear to ear.
    4. Don’t forget to complete your homework this weekend: hand writing, grammar and maths.
    5. At the seaside the waves crashed noisily against the shore: the storm had whipped up a frenzy of sea form.
    6. Jordan’s art project: was a hit she had finished with tremendously high standard.
    7. No one dared: to say a word frozen in fear.

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    • 16th June 2020 at 5:02 pm
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      Hi Zain,

      Are you feeling better?

      Double check your sentences – sentences 4 and 5 are correct but the others have the colon in the wrong place.

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 3:07 pm
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    Maths:
    1. 1204
    2. 120
    3. £6.10
    4. £ 4.65
    5. £3
    6. 1226g
    7. £4.45
    8. £5
    9. £1.49
    10. 781

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    • 16th June 2020 at 5:03 pm
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      Great answer Zain – well done.

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 4:21 pm
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    Hello my work hasn’t been sending for the past couple of days so as soon as I get it working I will do them.

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    • 16th June 2020 at 5:04 pm
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      Hi Aamirat,

      Do you know why it isn’t sending? No-one else seems to be having any problems?? You have blogged previously with no problems.

      Mrs Millard XX

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  • 16th June 2020 at 5:20 pm
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    Swimming is something my entire family is obsessed with: we are all exceptional swimmers
    I have everything ready for dance class now: I am just waiting for my instructor
    She grinned from ear to ear happiness
    Don’t forget to complete your homework this weekend: handwriting, grammar and maths
    At the seaside, the waves crashed noisily against the shore: the storm had whipped up a frenzy of the sea form

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    • 17th June 2020 at 10:08 am
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      Hi Aamirat,

      Well done – good use of colons.
      Did sentence 3 contain one?

      Mrs Millard XX

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