Tuesday 23rd June – Year 5
Hi Year 5 – I hope you and your families are all very well.
I’m glad to see that some of your have signed up for the Summer Reading Challenge – remember to tell me when you do.
Here are today’s tasks:
Punctuation
I thought that we would get some extra practice on our punctuation. Some of you are forgetting more basic punctuation as you write so I’d like you to put the correct punctuation into the following text:
Prince jack galloped down the lane with his marvellous shining sword drawn. Its tip pointed aggressively towards the heart of the formidable dragon. Leave the princess alone He roared in his thunderous voice. Do you think that I need you to save me laughed the outspoken princess. You dont even have a proper horse. I will not be saved by anyone riding a donkey the prince timidly turned his donkey around and rode back to his castle feeling quite embarrassed
English
Here are three drawings from an artist, based on stories from survivors:
I’d like you to write a descriptive piece of writing, describing what is happening. Think of your senses – not just what you can see but also what you can hear, smell, taste and touch. Think about what the atmosphere would have been like – terror, panic etc.
What might people by saying?
Maths
Warm up
Next, I’d like you to watch a second video about translation which builds on what you started yesterday.
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/describing-translations
Again, let me know at least 2 things that you learnt from the video today.
Spanish
The following lesson will focus on saying how you feel in Spanish:
https://classroom.thenational.academy/lessons/saying-how-you-feel-in-spanish-06edea
Blog me with how you are feeling.
Take care,
Mrs Millard and Mrs Munro XX
morning Mrs Milliard,
I done Spanish,
I think I got all them right because I put close quiz but it didn’t say next.
Well done Jessica,
Mrs Millard XX
Spanish test
I got 5/5 correct 😃📝
Well done Gracie,
Mrs Millard XX
Maths quiz
3/4😐
Thanks Gracie,
How did you find the lesson?
Mrs Millard XX
Prince jack galloped down the lane with his shining marvellous sword drawn. Its tip pointed aggressively towards the heart of the formidable dragon. Leave the princess alone he roared in his thunderous voice. Do you think that I need you to save me laughed the outspoken princess. You don’t even have a proper horse. I will not be saved by anyone riding a donkey the prince timidly turned his donkey around and rode back to his castle feeling quite embarrassed.
Well done Sadia,
Should there be a comma in the first sentence?
Should you have included any inverted commas?
Mrs Millard XX
english
the titanic
I can see in the paintings
a boat sinking to the seas service and people jumping in to boats a and smoke drifting from the top of the boat.thunder coming in with lightning and the horrible smell of the sea salt and sea weed with the waves coming right up rocking the boat around and around ready to fall. People screaming for help yelling help me! help me!and then mothers and fathers treat trying to get them and their children to safety and their families .
Thanks Gracie,
Don’t forget that sentences should always begin with capital letters. Should you have included any inverted commas?
Mrs Millard XX
I am in a ship and all i can see is huge waves and panicking people. All i can hear is children screaming as the waves crash against the boat so hard that the boat is going on it’s side . I can smell the seaweed coming from underneath the sea and the fishes trying to escape the waves . As the boat rocks i can taste the salty water coming in to my mouth . As I try not to move i can feel the sogginess of the boat .
Thanks Sadia,
The word ‘I’ should always be………………what?
Well done for thinking about the senses as you wrote.
Mrs Millard XX
Punctuation
Prince Jack galloped down the Lane,with his marvellous shiny sword drown.
It’s tip pointed aggressively, towards the heart of the formidable dragon. Leave the Princess alone; he roared in his thunderous voice. Do you think that I need you to save me, laughed the outspoken Princess. You don’t even have a proper hours. I will not be saved by any one riding a donkey, the Prince timidly ternd his donkey around and ride back to his carousel; feeling quite in barista.
Thanks Gracie,
Is your comma in the correct place in the first sentence?
Should you have included any inverted commas?
Mrs Millard XX
Good morning
The pictures are very old fashioned and dull and bland . In the first picture it looks like the boat is crashing against the sea the waves are so sharp like lightning. They are so detailed …
A good start Evie.
Mrs Millard XX
The smell would be salty and if you would smell the wood it would smell dirty .you would hear terrified screams and you would see scared little faces …
What do sentences always begin with Evie?
Mrs Millard XX
Morning miss Millard
Hi Aamirat!
Hello Mrs Millard,
Punctuation
Prince Jack galloped down the lane with his marvellous, shining sword drawn. It’s tip pointed aggressively towards the heart of the formidable dragon.
“Leave the princess alone!” he roared in his tremendous voice.
“Do you think that I need you to save me?” laughed the outspoken princess. “You don’t even have a proper horse. I will not be saved by anyone riding a donkey.” The prince timidly turned his donkey around and rode back to his castle feeling quite embarrassed.
Maths
I enjoyed the videos. I really like doing co-ordinates.
1. 2-1=1
2. 2+0=2
3. 2+1=3
4. 2+2=4
5. 2×2+1=5
6. 2+1×2=6
7. 9-2=7
8. 20-12=8
9. 12-2-1=9
10. 20÷2=10
11. 20-9=11
12. 12+0=12
Hi Lydia,
Great punctuation work – you are the first person today to use inverted commas!
I’m glad that you are enjoying the Maths – more translation work to come!
Very well done on the warm-up challenge – some great number sentences.
Mrs Millard XX
Prince Jack galloped down the lane with his marvelous shining sword drawn.It’s tip pointed aggressively towards the heart of the formidable dragon.Leave the princess alone he roared in his thunderous voice .Do you think that i need you to save me laughed the outspoken princess.You don’t even have a proper horse.I will not be saved by anyone riding a donkey the prince timidly turned his donkey around and rode back to his castle feeling quite embarrassed.
Well done for blogging Aamirat – it’s been a while!
Should the first sentence contain a comma?
Have you included any inverted commas?
Mrs Millard XX
English
I can see the Titanic drowning lots of lifeboats sailing and bits of ice . I can hear people shouting , crying and people running. I smelled the water , the cold wind and the smoke from the funnels . I could taste every one blood turning to ice . Every one was touching the bars trying to be safe . everyone was in panic because they don’t want to die .
Well done Alex,
I liked the part about blood turning to ice. Make sure that every sentence begins with a capital letter.
Mrs Millard XX
warm up Maths
1. 1-2=1
2. 2-0=2
3. 2+1=3
4. 9+1divide 2 -1 =4
5.9+1divide2=5
6.9-2-1=6
7. 9-2=7
8. 9-1=8
9. 9-0=9
10.9+1=10
11. 9+2=11
12.9+2+1=12
Great Maths Alex – well done!
Mrs Millard XX
Maths
I got 3/4
I learned more about shapes and also learned more about congeruent and translating shapes
Well done Alex – what does ‘congruent’ mean?
Mrs Millard XX
English:
I can see an iceberg ahead with many people panicing and i can hear childrens screams. I can smell the
fear of the humans I can taste the cold I can touch the icy cold freezing water.
Hi Zain,
Well done for thinking about senses. I liked the bit about smelling the fear of humans.
Mrs Millard XX
Maths:
1. 2-1=1
2. 2+0=2
3. 2+1=3
4. 2+2=4
5. 2×2+1=5
6. 2+1×2=6
7. 9-2=7
8. 20-12=8
9. 12-2-1=9
10. 20÷2=10
11. 20-9=11
12. 12+0=12
Well done Zain.
What did you think about the video?
Mrs Millard XX