18 thoughts on “Tuesday 24th March – English – Year 6

  • 24th March 2020 at 9:47 am
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    My story will be about an abandoned mermaid who is searching for her family.On the other hand if she gets scared she will faint very easily.

    The start of my story goes like ths:
    It all started off with a mermaid who could faint very easily. She was not capable of many things she wished upon and if she were to think or see anything she wished not to see she would faint in a blink of an eye…

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    • 24th March 2020 at 10:34 am
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      Sounds like a great story Ebony – I look forward to hearing more!

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  • 24th March 2020 at 11:06 am
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    My story is about a girl who whent on holiday were her mum always whent after she passed away.it goes like this:
    The ocean was said that it was haunted . The girls mum drowned in that ocean and her body was never found the girl got pulled in and she was never seen by the villagers again. The girl got powers to speak and breath and she finds her mother…..

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  • 24th March 2020 at 11:18 am
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    My story is about me getting sucked into the sea by a sea monster.

    My story is also about a submarine coming to save me but gets sucked in by the sea monster.

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  • 24th March 2020 at 11:56 am
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    My story will be fiction and will be about a ship that crashes into a iceburg (but is not the titanic) and a girl inside is secretly a mermaid, she finds her family under-water and they help the boat to get to their destination and the mermaids follow behind ; now the girl lives with her family under-water.

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  • 24th March 2020 at 1:10 pm
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    These all sound like fantastic stories Year 6 – well done!!

    Make sure you are including lots of punctuation and writing skills when you are writing the opening!!

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  • 24th March 2020 at 1:23 pm
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    My story is about a ghost girl who died in a terrifying storm.
    She now haunts the wreckage of the ship and will do what ever it takes to stop anyone who dares venture into the deep depths of ocean.

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    • 31st March 2020 at 11:57 am
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      Is she trying to save them or kill them?

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  • 24th March 2020 at 1:33 pm
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    she is running away from a wizard who is trying to kill her because she is the kings daughter and she is swimming away with a merman to try and live a happy life together

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    • 31st March 2020 at 11:56 am
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      Does the wizard not like the king?

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  • 24th March 2020 at 3:55 pm
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    My story is in first person about a girl who goes swimming in the ocean and hears a sound coming from the bottom of the ocean.She is curious and wants to see what it is.My story goes like this:

    I was swimming in the ocean happily, the next minute I heard a strange sound :it frightened me.Intrigued, I left my brothers behind (when they weren’t looking ) and followed the strange sound, brushing the seaweed off of my arms.

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  • 24th March 2020 at 4:03 pm
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    Did my Story come through ? It keeps saying submitted but I cant see my work
    Thank You
    Amy

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    • 24th March 2020 at 5:04 pm
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      Hi Amy

      Yes it has come through but all new comments need to be approved first so you might now see it straight away. A great story so far – well done.

      Hope you are well and enjoying the sunshine.

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  • 25th March 2020 at 11:45 am
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    my story is about a girl called cindy who loves the sea here is the beginning

    there once was a girl called cindy who loved the sea and one day she saw a mermaid called Malisa who saw cindy and pulled cindy in the ocean

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    • 31st March 2020 at 11:56 am
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      Does your story have a happy or a sad ending?

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  • 25th March 2020 at 2:01 pm
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    Sorry if I am late , but my story is about a women who is given a second life, and she decides to come back as a 11 year old. She was abandoned girl and was left on the shore with her little sister, they explore the beach on even mange to make a little den out of litter and scrap things . Her sister spots something in the ocean and wanders of , later her sister (the 11year old) finds her protected by some dolphins ,she tells you that she has found both of us a new family . I think she has gone crazy but later you agree . Some how you can now do every thing under water. Like in the picture you hold a lantern and swim calmly to the dolphins but they swim away with your sister . Then some thing strokes your leg.

    That’s mainly what the begging is about but that isn’t the first paragraph.

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    • 25th March 2020 at 2:06 pm
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      Sounds like a fantastic story Chanel.

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  • 25th March 2020 at 2:11 pm
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    My story goes like this:

    I saw a bright light shining into my big pupils , at first I looked around and then a deep voice whispered into my ear ,” Welcome home Abby”, I shivered and ran away but my feet weren’t following me . I was terrified ; that idiot didn’t even introduce him self-what a fool ! Why did he even know my name, I didn’t give him permission to take ( kidnapp )me from my dear family.

    Do you like it?

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