English Writing Task- Tuesday 24th March 2020

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Hello everyone! Hope you are all ok and ready for some more learning today!

Today’s task is to plan a story!

Click on the link above to see the story map and photos more clearly. Use the headings to help plan and write a brief outline of your story in the comments.

If you want, you could draw the plan on paper first so you have a better idea ready for your write up.

Be creative!

Remember to think about and plan for your;

  • Adjectives
  • Adverbs
  • Sentence starters

See you all soon,

Miss Bishop, Mrs Baldry and Mrs Denny.



17 thoughts on “English Writing Task- Tuesday 24th March 2020

  • 24th March 2020 at 10:15 am

    Introduction – Meets the characters and explain who they are and what the weather is like.
    Build up – A bottle comes to sea and starts to make the potion.
    Setting – Dark sky
    Setting – Interesting bottle, Little pebbles covering the floor
    Problem – Potion in bottle to try and kill Luna
    Potion is after Luna because when she was a little girl in the sea ,and got a stone and threw it at Toddy. Toddy suffered by it. Toddy suffered and revenge comes from the sea.
    Characters – luna, Toddy, Ruby and Archie
    Resolution – they make sure they don’t die and fight the ocean
    Ending – the evil guy drowns and everyone is alive, Luna has a special necklace and holds it up, Toddy suffered and drowned they see the light and the light is too bright.

    • 24th March 2020 at 11:01 am

      Sounds like a great plan, can’t wait to read your story.

  • 24th March 2020 at 10:15 am

    introduction – animals playing around they hear noise.

    build up – storm shattered the world and a lighting bolt changed everything to up side down.

    setting – the turquoise water. the floating water. the mint green grass.

    problem – everything is up side down. pot hole is above the ground. sky is an the ground. a mystery bag hanging in the air.

    resolution – animals use special powers to return everything to normal.

    ending – animals powers changed for a week then went back to up side down.

    characters – fish ant rabbit all can talk.

    • 24th March 2020 at 11:01 am

      Wow, can’t wait to read your story Samuel

  • 24th March 2020 at 10:18 am

    Rosy and the Unicorn Were playing Adventures. Find a puddle with Sam in who wants to be part of
    The Enchanted world.
    Build up
    Humans discover the underworld. They were on a hunt for a special stone to keep the world a live
    The magical land. A enchanted underworld. The fairy land.
    The humans found the fairies underworld and it was taken over. The fairies were trying to make a plan but they had no one to help them.
    Rosy – the loving fairy
    Unicorn of hope
    Sam – the enchanted fish

    Fish shares plan with unicorn. Unicorn tries to use plan. Bag of potions help.

    Rosy, the unicorn and Sam carry on their adventure through the enchanted world.

    • 24th March 2020 at 11:00 am

      Sounds like a fantasy story you will be writing. Fantastic

  • 24th March 2020 at 10:21 am

    introduction – meet the characters wishing well collects wishes from the sea . when Charlie bucket meets Rocco the shark
    build up – Rocco accaidentally falls into Charlie the bucket and travels to the top where he meets Maisie the tree
    setting- . the fantastic blue water . the sooper green trees. the cloudy blue sky
    problem – the wishing well bucket might fall and destroy the world.
    characters – Maisie – the talking tree, Charlie – the wishing well and Rocco the talking shark
    Resolution – Rocco the shark bites the bucket to bring Charlie down safely.
    Ending – Charlie and Rocco live in the sea and Maisie replants herself by the river.

    • 24th March 2020 at 11:00 am

      I cant wait to read your story Maisie

  • 24th March 2020 at 10:59 am

    introduction- Animals playing together.
    build up- Dark wizard turns the world up side down.
    setting-sparkling lake,lush grass.
    problem- world is up side down
    resolution-Dark wizard dies everything returns to normal
    ending – Nothing happened again
    characters-cheetah,lion and tiger can talk normally

  • 24th March 2020 at 1:38 pm

    Once upon a time there was a ufo that crashed into the earth and aliens came out ,but everyone called them Paul,aliens,Jeff and lady gags

    Paul said “why can’t we just be friends with people?”And lady gaga said “because they don’t like us!”

    We landed in lings primary school, and it was cool

    The problem is that no one really new or wanted to talk to Paul,aliens,Jeff and lady gaga

    The characters are Paul,aliens,Jeff and lady gaga

    As the years past everyone started to know Paul,aliens,Jeff and lady gaga

    Happy ever after I got famous said”paul,aliens,Jeff and lady gaga
    They lived happily ever after,but they had to stay at northampton/lings primary school

    • 24th March 2020 at 1:45 pm

      A great plan Kristers I can’t wait to read your story, This will be on the blog tomorrow.

  • 25th March 2020 at 3:05 pm

    Settings: – a deserted meadow; an old, rock well in the middle; sunny, summer day.
    Characters: 7 years old, blonde, green eyed boy- Jared ; a scary, small goblin.
    Introduction: Jared is a youngest shepherd in his village. First time he takes the sheep to unknown place.
    Build up: Jared is very curious and leans over the well. He lost his balance and fells into the dark of the well. He lands with big splash in the cold water of a cave lake.
    Problem: Jared is scared and lost. He does not know how to find way out.
    Resolution: He meets a friendly goblin.
    Ending: The goblin helps him to find a way out.

    • 25th March 2020 at 3:24 pm

      Can’t wait to read your story Damian. Sounds interesting! Thank you for clearly planning your story

  • 28th March 2020 at 9:18 pm

    Introduction – A brother and sister were playing computer games and then they heard a weird noise.
    Build up – They both gone outside and saw a UFO X, the weird noises were coming from it.
    Setting – The UFO had particles going around, they were rich in green stars and lots more.
    Problem – They had no idea what to do , they screamed for help but no-one was there.
    Characters – Barry and Lora, UFO
    Resolution – Then they were using different machines trying to break the UFO.
    Ending – But then it WAS JUST A DREAM…

    • 29th March 2020 at 3:37 pm

      Can’t wait to read this, Alex. I can imagine it has a very creative front cover to go with it. Maybe you could design one if you have time! Fantastic work as always.

  • 1st April 2020 at 12:55 pm

    Introduction –Write about weather and children having playtime at the school playground.
    Build up – a boy saw a UFO on the grass. AND it looked like it was broken into pieces.
    Setting – blue sky Sunny day
    Problem – a UFO landed
    Problem-it looked very big and dangerous
    Resolution – everybody doesn’t panic about the UFO
    Ending – everybody was surprised about what happened
    characters-boy, police, news reporter, alien,teacher

    • 1st April 2020 at 2:47 pm

      A very clear plan Timur thank you


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