4 thoughts on “Independent Writing Task

  • 20th November 2020 at 3:56 pm
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    I heard that America’s pavements were made out of gold, so i told my family that we should start a new life in America so i can get a better job and maybe have a bit more money. A month went buy and it was time to leave and get onto the boat to travel to America. The boat set sail and there was so much fog that i could hardly tell apart the sky and the sea the were blended together like to clouds colliding together and swirling. That night there was a ferocious storm that had lightning and thunder the lightning struck a rock that crumble rapidly into little rocks. I wished that i had enough money to buy a room underneath the deck away from the storm, next thing it was hailing (bits of ice with rain together) and raining all at once i had 4 a news paper that i covered my family with but then…. i forgot that paper is very easy to get wet aspecially when you have no roof on top of you. Surprisingly the next morning there was now storm, just a beautiful day with a sun and a very blue sky I saw America me and my family were so excited that we were going to start a new life. I stepped out the boat and saw America!

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  • 20th November 2020 at 4:12 pm
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    This, weather is very bad 👎. We,all are wet this boat is soaked .

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  • 26th November 2020 at 3:04 pm
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    it was awesome what we did, And also what we did with jessie in school! i loved it so much:)

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  • 27th November 2020 at 10:46 am
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    This weather is very bad. The boat is rocking up and down. Everyone is sea sick even I feel really sick. Rain is pelting down mine and everyone’s collar.

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