Tuesday 30th June 2020 – Writing plan
Today you are going to plan the writing a letter to add in a time capsule. The letter is about what we have learnt and what life has been like during lockdown.
Below is a plan to use to help structure your letter, Remember this is just a plan.
Who are you writing to?
A little information about you:
- Introduce yourself – name, school, age, where you live.
- What are your hobbies?
- Three postive powerful adjectives to describe yourself.
- Favourite food/ colour/ game
What have your learnt about being in lockdown?
- How has the situation made you feel?
- What have been the three good things about lockdown?
- What three things have you missed?
- What lessons have you learnt from lockdown? (three things e.g. stay safe. alert)
Hopes and wishes for the future:
- Three wishes/ hopes for the future
- If you could add 5 items in the time capsule what would you add and why – describe the items as expanded nouns
- Your motto – a phrase or a statement you believe in e.g. “Two wrongs don’t make a right.”
Provide as much detail as you can as you will use the plan to write a letter on Wednesday. Handwrite and send a photo of your work or use the headings and bullet points to complete in the comments below.
Remember this is just a plan.
The Year 4 Team
So does that mean we comment the plan today and hand write and then send a picture tomorrow on Wednesday.
Absolutely Hargun
Kiran-lings primary-9-Northampton
football-golf-martial arts-
athletic
rice-black or silver-golf
annoyed
spending time with family i don’t know what else sorry
friends teachers and doing work in the classroom
stay safe baking cakes don’t know what else
Thank you for your plan Kiran
A little information about you:
Introduce yourself – name, school, age, where you live.
Hargun Singh, Lings Primary school, nine years old, Northampton, Lings
What are your hobbies?
Learning, school homework of writing task, to listen to the news as UK is having an increase of the cases.
Three positive powerful adjectives to describe yourself.
Positive, Confident, Considerate.
Favourite food/ colour/ game
Pizza but not this time-burger, Blue favourite colour; Minecraft including Wii game support.
What have your learnt about being in lockdown?
How has the situation made you feel?
Bored as I haven’t gone out for nearly four months (except my garden).
What have been the three good things about lockdown?
Dad working from home; School homework been given by email; Having time to complete my work.
What three things have you missed?
My friends, my school and my fun activities (Year four National gallery in London)
What lessons have you learnt from lockdown? (three things e.g. stay safe. alert)
Washing hands; Keeping hygiene; To stay inside, warn others to not go out more often and to enjoy inside.
Hopes and wishes for the future:
Three wishes/ hopes for the future
For covid-19 to go away, for lockdown to open and more people listen.
If you could add 5 items in the time capsule what would you add and why – describe the items as expanded nouns.
Descriptive newspaper, safe medicine, appealing flower, cleaned food and a blank sanitiser.
Your motto – a phrase or a statement you believe in e.g. “Two wrongs don’t make a right.”
Walk outside and eat something straight away from a shop.
A very clear plan Hargun! Thank you
I am Franek Madej, I am 9 and I go to a fantastic school called “Lings Primary School”.
My hobbies are: Playing Football, playing video games and being friendly.
I am brave, honest and generous.
I have no favorite food because I eat everything, my favorite colour is black and my favorite games are “Roblox” and “FIFA”.
I am happy.
Being alone, spending time with my family and shorter school.
I have missed football, playing games with my friends and I miss my friends from school.
I have learnt that you need to be safe, aware and ready.
I hope that it comes back to normal. I wish I could meet with my friends at school. I hope I will be safe.
I would add money to see if anything changes with the currency when we finish lockdown. A console to see what will the brands and the looks will be when we will be able to go out. Paper to see what will happen to todays paper after lockdown.
My motto is “Where there’s a will, there’s a way”.
which fifa do you play
Talal-9-lingsprimary-northampton
Football-gaming-basketball
school-friends-schoolsport
football-chickenchips-darkblue
bored
beingfree-spending time with family-still being able to do work
nothing really
for us to be back in school- for there not to be covid 19-and to be safe
” 1000000 takes down one”.
A little information about you:
– Damian, Lings Primary School, 9 years old, Northampton
-Football, swimming, PlayStation games
-Smart, funny, energetic
-Roast chicken and gravy, orange, football
What have your learnt about being in lockdown?
– upset, disppointed
– Spend more time with my family, more time to do things I enjoy
– Friends, school, sport competitions
-How to stay safe and how supporting each other is important.
Hopes and wishes for the future:
-My favourite book, football cards, a letter, a photo
– ‘Kindness doesn’t cost anything’
A little information about you. 1) Introducing yourself: Regina Williams, Lings Primary School, 39 Swain Court. 2) Hobbies: art, painting and drawing. 3) Describing yourself: calm, gentle and messy. 4) Favourite food/colours/game: burgers, pizza, salad and sweet corn. Pink, purple and blue. What have you learnt about being in lockdown? 1) Situation made you feel: devastated, scared and terrified. 2) Three good things about the lockdown: wash your hands, don’t touch your face and don’t high-five somebody. 3) What three things have you missed: touching my face, high-five my brother. 4) learnt from lockdown: don’t touch your face, and don’t high-five anybody. Hopes and wishes for the future. 1) There wishes and hopes: lockdown to stop, seeing friends and seeing family member’s. 2) Adding 5 items in the time capsule: food because they mite not have any food to eat. Soap to wash your hands if you don’t have soap. Clothes if you don’t have any clothes to wear. Mask to protect your nose and mouth. Shoes for them so that they wouldn’t have to walk bare feet. 3) Phrase or a statement: I believe that the lockdown is going to go away. I believe that we need to wash our hands for 20 seconds.
My name is Timur.
And i am 9 years old.
my hobbies are gaming, playing,drawing.
my favorite food is sweets.
Red is my favorite color.
Roblox is my favorite game.
I am feeling sad in lock down because i cant go to school and see my friend.
More holiday, Only a little bit of work, spending time with family.
I have missed my friends, swimming, movies.
i have learnt stay safe, alert, stay 2m apart.
my hopes for the future are:
lock down will end.
i will have a good life.
get a new pet.
I am 9 years old and I am called Max I live next to a lake and near my school and Lings filed. My hobbies are building my lego and playing minecraft and roblox and especially with my brother and soon my sister and football. I might be amazing, bold and loving.
My favourite food and colour is toad in the the whole and red and game is football. It’s made feel scared because my mum’s grandad past away and I don’t know how hi went or what he had.
I get to see my brother more often because I am not at school for 6 hours because I have dinner when I get back and 2 hours later he goes to bed but now I can have most of the day with my brother. I can play football with out equipment and bike ride with my stepdad. I am missing my friends and my teachers very much. Going on trips and running around with my friends.
That not every single step leads danger. Going to peoples houses now mater and we can barely do that. And not everyone is different in age.
I would love to have a mini bike fixing company with my stepdad. To be a minecraft YouTuber. Also I am a big brother to my brother who is 2 years old and my sister Who is 5 or 6 years old so I wish I could be the best brother. My phone because it has good pictures of me and my brother, my teddy called Tigger because he means a lot to me, my lava rocks because you can only get them after a volcano eruption, lego because I spen most of the day in my room playing with it and I build nice lego sets and the Harry potters books I have been up until 7:59 or 8:01 at night because I’m reading number 2 the chamber of secrets. Two wrongs don’t make a right.
Paragraph 1
-Hi I’m Owen and I am 9 years old and lings primary school is amazing and I live in 5 pine ridge.
– My hobbies are playing with my brother, playing minecraft sometimes with my brother playing in the garden.
– I’m positive, energetic and smart.
-My favourite game is minecraft and sword and shield.
Paragraph 2
-I feel worried as I would very like if I could see them again.
– The things I like in lockdown is that I don’t have to go out so I can keep safe also I get to type messages to my friend Cody and I get free time alone.
– I also miss my friends, school and not to be able to go smyths.
– I learnt to be safe and do social distancing plus to stay at home if it’s not desperate.
paragraph 2
– I would like to be a professional minecraft player and also a YouTuber and make my own video games.
– My xbox is very special and my animal books to I can’t let go of my teddy ben my crystal’s that I found in my garden witch was weird and my playmobil modern house.
– two wrongs equals a mistake.
What a fantastic plan Owen, well done. I think everyone is feeling such a mixture of emotions at the moment and you have included this brilliantly.