Tuesday 23rd June – Writing Planning Task.

Hello Year 4, We hope you are enjoying the sun and getting regular breaks outside in the fresh air.

Some of you wrote some amazing poems on Spring/ Easter when we posted the task many weeka ago. So we would like you to use the planning format below to plan our related to Summer and Summer holidays. I know that your summer holidays will look a bit different this year but there is still the weather, time with your family, eating ice cream, playing outside days out safely, taking walks and many more things you can be doing in Summer.

If you can’t print you can use the headings, handwrite and send photo to our Year 4 email or use the headings in the comments. Please make sure you have atleast two examples under each heading. Examples are given to help you with any new language so you should be able to write down some ideas based on Summer and Summer Holidays.


10 thoughts on “Tuesday 23rd June – Writing Planning Task.

  • 23rd June 2020 at 10:05 am

    Nouns:home,someone,dog,food and let’s go on a walk
    similes:cunning like a fox your fur is as white as snow
    metaphor:the cold breeze was a slap in the face
    alliteration:don’t dream it.drive it.
    personification:the sun treads a path through the wood.

    • 23rd June 2020 at 12:34 pm

      Fantastic plan Kiran

      • 23rd June 2020 at 1:53 pm

        Noun: woman, dog, truth, boy, building, danger, someone, home and food. Verbs: call, camp, act, add, admire, care, carry, dare, bandage, and deal. Adjectives: able, back, bad, calm, dangerous, daring, each, early, bare and easy. Adverbs: accidentally, actual, carefully, calmly, cheerfully, awkwardly, almost and boldly. Similes: As cute as a kitten, as bold as brass, as cold as winter and as black as a spider. Metaphor: The snow is a white blanket, his eyes were clear like the river, the sun was yellow like a honeycomb. Alliteration: home sweet home, busy as a bee, good as gold. Personification: the wind howled in the night, lightning danced across the sky.

        • 23rd June 2020 at 3:50 pm

          Great plan Regina, look forward to reading your poem tomorrow.

  • 23rd June 2020 at 1:33 pm

    Nouns. girl boy school zoo playground park dog bee cow lizard book flower
    verbs. accept admire admit advise coach coil collect.
    adjective. afraid ashamed eager eligible associated bored kind
    adverbs. quietly beautiful peaceful far away back
    onomatopoeia. pop zoom bang crash screech
    similes. John was running as fast as lightning.
    metaphor.I have a heart of a lion.
    alliteration. Alie ate apples all afternoon
    personification. The car danced across the very icy road.

    • 23rd June 2020 at 3:51 pm

      Great clear plan Talal, Look forward to reading your poem.

  • 23rd June 2020 at 1:51 pm

    Nouns: House, garden, slide swings, bike and rain.
    Verbs: Playing, running, walking, biking, relaxing and exercising.
    Adjectives: Fast, unlimited and enjoying.
    Adverb: Peacefully, miserable and quietly.
    Onomatopoeia: Run, zooming and quickly.
    Similes: zooming at the speed of light and running like the wind.
    Metaphor: The burning sun is like fire and The hard rain is like hail.
    Alliteration: Ride it and be like the wind
    Personification: The burning sun is like a radiator.

    • 23rd June 2020 at 3:50 pm

      Fantastic plan Owen, can’t wait to read your poem!

  • 24th June 2020 at 11:31 am

    nouns- swimming pool, ice cream, garden, friends, barbecue
    verbs- splashed, played, enjoyed, relaxed
    alliteration-big brother’s bike, swim slowly in a swimming pool
    adjectives-warm, icy
    adverbs-slowly, quick
    onomatopoeia- splash, meow
    similes-My cat haunts flies like a tiger.
    metaphors-The swimming pool was a small pond in a huge garden.
    personifications- Flowers danced in the garden.

    • 24th June 2020 at 9:49 pm

      Well done, a great bank of words.


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