Tuesday 23rd June – Writing Planning Task.
Hello Year 4, We hope you are enjoying the sun and getting regular breaks outside in the fresh air.
Some of you wrote some amazing poems on Spring/ Easter when we posted the task many weeka ago. So we would like you to use the planning format below to plan our related to Summer and Summer holidays. I know that your summer holidays will look a bit different this year but there is still the weather, time with your family, eating ice cream, playing outside days out safely, taking walks and many more things you can be doing in Summer.
If you can’t print you can use the headings, handwrite and send photo to our Year 4 email or use the headings in the comments. Please make sure you have atleast two examples under each heading. Examples are given to help you with any new language so you should be able to write down some ideas based on Summer and Summer Holidays.
Nouns:home,someone,dog,food and let’s go on a walk
verbs:was,rides,saved,is
adjectives:incredible,enormous,ferocious,significant
adverb:cautiously,slowly,beautifully
onomatopoeia:crash,bang,splash,hiss
similes:cunning like a fox your fur is as white as snow
metaphor:the cold breeze was a slap in the face
alliteration:don’t dream it.drive it.
personification:the sun treads a path through the wood.
Fantastic plan Kiran
Noun: woman, dog, truth, boy, building, danger, someone, home and food. Verbs: call, camp, act, add, admire, care, carry, dare, bandage, and deal. Adjectives: able, back, bad, calm, dangerous, daring, each, early, bare and easy. Adverbs: accidentally, actual, carefully, calmly, cheerfully, awkwardly, almost and boldly. Similes: As cute as a kitten, as bold as brass, as cold as winter and as black as a spider. Metaphor: The snow is a white blanket, his eyes were clear like the river, the sun was yellow like a honeycomb. Alliteration: home sweet home, busy as a bee, good as gold. Personification: the wind howled in the night, lightning danced across the sky.
Great plan Regina, look forward to reading your poem tomorrow.
Nouns. girl boy school zoo playground park dog bee cow lizard book flower
verbs. accept admire admit advise coach coil collect.
adjective. afraid ashamed eager eligible associated bored kind
adverbs. quietly beautiful peaceful far away back
onomatopoeia. pop zoom bang crash screech
similes. John was running as fast as lightning.
metaphor.I have a heart of a lion.
alliteration. Alie ate apples all afternoon
personification. The car danced across the very icy road.
Great clear plan Talal, Look forward to reading your poem.
Nouns: House, garden, slide swings, bike and rain.
Verbs: Playing, running, walking, biking, relaxing and exercising.
Adjectives: Fast, unlimited and enjoying.
Adverb: Peacefully, miserable and quietly.
Onomatopoeia: Run, zooming and quickly.
Similes: zooming at the speed of light and running like the wind.
Metaphor: The burning sun is like fire and The hard rain is like hail.
Alliteration: Ride it and be like the wind
Personification: The burning sun is like a radiator.
Fantastic plan Owen, can’t wait to read your poem!
nouns- swimming pool, ice cream, garden, friends, barbecue
verbs- splashed, played, enjoyed, relaxed
alliteration-big brother’s bike, swim slowly in a swimming pool
adjectives-warm, icy
adverbs-slowly, quick
onomatopoeia- splash, meow
similes-My cat haunts flies like a tiger.
metaphors-The swimming pool was a small pond in a huge garden.
personifications- Flowers danced in the garden.
Well done, a great bank of words.