Tuesday 31st March – Planning your story – writing task
Good morning Year 4.
It has been great to see your blogging over the last week and the photos we have received via email. Keep up your excellent work.
Today’s writing task is to plan a story, but written in first person, as you are the person telling the story.
Your story needs creativity and imagination: Imagine you have entered a computer game.
Use these heading and questions to help plan your computer game story.
Introduction:
Who is in your story?
How do you enter the computer game?
Where is your story set?
When is your story set?
Entering the game:
What is the problem now you are in the game?
How do you feel?
What is the setting of the game like? How does is feel? Look? Does the setting change?
Ending:
How could you leave your story on a cliff-hanger or could you add a twist in the story?
Remember this is only a plan. So use headings to give a brief idea. You could use a story map if you prefer and email to us at yearfour@lingsprimary.org.uk
Happy Planning
The Year 4 Team
once upon a time, there were three men called, kristers, kiran, damian.
but this is when it all started, we were just walking by and we saw a portal we went in the portal and all of us transported into a computer game.
our story was set in a popular game called happy wheels
our story was set at 13:00am/1pm.
the problem is that we don’t know what to do, even though i know how to play when i was still in my dimention.
i feel like im never going to see my dimention, sadly.
the setting of the game is like a 2nd chance. it feels like i’m in a dream because we would not die.it looks like the real happy wheel but it just can’t unless kristers, kiran. damian makes it.
after 3 years, we all made it with team work and then …
Good plan Kristers can’t wait to read your story once you have written in tomorrow’s task
Introduction
– My brother
– Wishing well
– In the water
– Along time ago
Entering the game
– you cant get out inles some one wishes you out
– Ancsious and scared
– It changes by the sea weed shooting up and the waves going crazey
Ending
I hope that if I wished my brother would come back
Thank you for your plan, your game sounds scary. Look forward to reading your whole story in tomorrow’s task
In the year of 2020, two kids were playing their names were Cody and Owen. Soon, a dimensional portal appeared and they was sucked into a video game. The game was called pokemon let’s go eevee and pikachu popular for nintendo switch. It was 9 am/ 9 o,clock in the morning.
“What are we going to do Owen” exclaimed Cody. We’ll have to go through the game. 5 days later, they made it a third of the way through the game. I feel confident as we should out this dimension. The setting is like adventuring through the actual game it feels like a dream the setting changes as they in counter the elite four. The next day, something weird happend…
Cant wait to read your whole story tomorrow. Good use of inverted commas, remember comma before you close your inverted commas
Once, don’t remember when, Me [Franek], Damian, and Kiran were on a journey to buy video games. We all chose the same, FIFA was it’s name. We went home after and this must have been stupid to tell but as soon as we started to play we were addicted. So we played, played and played.
The weirdest thing happened. As we saw an immense portal I thought it’s a glitch. It was inside the screen. We felt uncomfortable but annoyed as with a black hole in the screen we could not play any longer. So uncautiously we entered the hole…
As we entered we were frightened. Are brother, Darek came to play. We all hid in the main menu. He chose the match setup menu and chose the teams. Luckily we were on the same team in Juventus and we even luckier we played a Scottish team so it was very bad. We ended up wining three to nil, but the problem was we could never get out. Then another glitch. We met a weird player and it came to a conversation and said we could only by wining another game and each scoring a goal…
So are Darek played again. We all ended up wining six to five and all of scored twice and we all won together after a series of lost goals we were let out of the game with a sigh.
Great remember Franek this is just a plan. Tomorrow’s task is to write the whole story so you could adapt this but great start.
Isabelle Bolton’s Story Plan
Introduction
Who is in the story?
Harry
Wendy Harry’s mum
Ender man
Amelia
Derek Harry’s dad
Where is your story set?
Arcade
Bedroom
When is your story set?
In 2020 but when he enters the game the year is 3020 so skipped a thousand years
Entering the game
What is the problem now you’re in the game?
You cannot get out of this game on your own. need some help.
How do you feel?
Scared/frightened/worried
What is the setting at the game like?
When you walk into the game it is all pixelated
Does the setting change?
Goes from a 3d world to a 2d world
How does it feel?
Bright/silent/eerie
Ending
How can you leave it on a cliff hanger?
There was a popping of pixels-what made this happen?
Does Amelia come back?
Will someone save her? …
Hello It’s great to see you on here! Fantastic plan look forward to reading you story in tomorrow’s task. Hope you are ok
Once upon a time
there were three boys Samuel,Michael,Kristers,
there were also three footballers
Ronaldo,Messi,Vandik,
but,one day the boys saw a ginnie
We only got one wish and we haft to share a wish so why not meat Ronaldo Messi and Vandik so FIFA and PES and football Michael
and Ronaldo took photo on Instagram and went to a restaurant Samuel and Messi went to the beech and and after watched a film Kristers and Vandik went on a boat and after watched a football match
Great plan Michael. Look forward to reading your story you write in tomorrow’s task
Introduction:
In my story there’s me Player 1/Sonic and my new friend Player 2, who joined the game.
I entered the game when I put the wrong coin in to the arcade machine.
The set of my game is outside on a racing cars track and there are lots of trees around it all. It’s Tuesday March 28th and it’s a day time.
Entering the game:
I feel a bit scared and nervous because I don’t know what to do and have no-one to help me to leave the game.
Ending:
Someone joined the game and when we finished racing we were able to leave the game. Finally!
Thank you so much for your plan Alex, can’t wait to read your story.
Plan:
1.Computer, Dad, Me, Computer Men,
2.was playing on the computer, Then I somehow got sucked into my computer,and I was shouting
for my dad to help me to get out of the computer.
3.My story is set in my mansion.
4.My story will happen today after what happened
5.The problem is that everything is micro chipped and I cant get out.
6.I feel very scared because I cant get out of the computer.
7.it feels very stuffed and looks very weird and technical
8.the story ends that my dad deletes the computer with a special remote and I get sucked out of the computer. And there is a happy ending
Thank you for your plan Timur