One day , long ago, there lived an Emperor that had banished the Evil citizens to one of the abandoned regions. Later that week, the Emperor conjured up a magical earthquake that made the Evil region float up. The Emperor connected chains to the mainland and made a law that told the ordinary citizens and the law enforcement that they were forbidden to go up there.
One a pone a time there was an mountain they were having a party on the mountain then all of a sudden the mountain lifted up in the sky everyone paneked an a few days latter people started to build homes an live in the air with water even wilest floting in the air having the time of there life.
One day , long ago, there lived an Emperor that had banished the Evil citizens to one of the abandoned regions. Later that week, the Emperor conjured up a magical earthquake that made the Evil region float up. The Emperor connected chains to the mainland and made a law that told the ordinary citizens and the law enforcement that they were forbidden to go up there.
Great language Simar!
One a pone a time there was an mountain they were having a party on the mountain then all of a sudden the mountain lifted up in the sky everyone paneked an a few days latter people started to build homes an live in the air with water even wilest floting in the air having the time of there life.
Some great time conjunctions.