Friday 1st May – Year 5
Bienvenido a Mayo! Welcome to May!
Let’s do the next section of our non-chronological text. Find out some facts about clothing in Ancient Greece. Then write your section.
Remember you need a title, maybe subtitles, possible a diagram or picture, rhetorical questions. Challenge- can you include a glossary?
The aim is to have a full non-chronological page written by the end of next week.
So you can start putting your introduction, the paragraph from Tuesday and today onto paper.
You don’t need to send me a picture of the whole page yet- but you can do if you want some help with it or some feedback.
Today you can just type your paragraph onto the blog if you prefer, just remember next week I will want to see the whole page.
Here is the email again, in case you do want to email me anything
Watch this video to remind yourself how we find the perimeter of a compound shape (a shape which can be split into 2 or more other shapes)
Now use what we learnt today and yesterday to help you solve these problem.
The RSC has a Macbeth workshop on today from 11-12 on YouTube, you can find out about behind the scenes and ask some questions.
Watch this Spanish nursery rhyme.
Can you sing it? Can you work out what any of the words mean? What are they singing about?
https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=simple+spanish +nursery+rhymes&docid=608027825204037613&mid= 7DD6F43239D200C5DD737DD6F43239D200C5DD73&view =detail&FORM=VIRE
48 thoughts on “Friday 1st May – Year 5”
There cloths are like a scaff and there very weird I think that sum of them poor so they get these cloths for free and there cloths are very clean some of them are dutey because they have no muney and plus them pole out there take kare of them and there cloths Luke very posh so I things I will where there cloths there very nice cloths I wide where them every day
Well done Leon, you’ve described their clothing well…do you think you can add some full stops to your writing?
3) 55 and 3/4 ok
The Spanish is pio ola c eben or aben
In ancient Greece, The most popular materials were wool and linen. In the later era of Ancient Greece, the wealthy people started wearing cotton and silk. Ancient Greeks wore leather sandals but most of the time they went out barefoot. Most of the clothing was white but sometimes they died the clothes using plants and insects.
I love the use of your time conjunctions especially later era. I think you might need a comma before you use ‘but’ in sentences 3 and 4. and do you need a capital for the in the first sentence? I think you might have added the time conjunction afterwards and forgot to change the t.
Well researched, and your tone is perfect for a non-chronological text!
A lot of the time ancient Greeks were barefoot ,mostly at home its rare they didn’t wear shoes outside. When wearing footwear the most popular was them wearing leather sandals, wealthy Greeks wore more precious and expensive jewellery , made from gold and silver .they wore rings necklaces and earrings .
Great researching Evie. Well done for starting with a time adverbial. Have another read of sentence 1, it doesn’t quite flow. I think there needs to be a couple more commas (when wearing footwear is a clause) and at least 1 more capital in your writing.
One of my answers is the same as yours Sim, have another look and show me your working out.
I know the Spanish alphabet
maybe try it its very catchy
The Ancient Greeks wore woollen fabric. It was hot almost all year so they wore loose light clothing. Rich people wore tunics that were brightly coloured and poor people had to wear all white. They wore leather sandals or boots on their feet. Ladies had to wear their tunics down to their ankles. They also wore their hair in plaits that were wrapped around their heads. Women liked to wear headbands made of metal or ribbon.
Great non-chronological text Lydia. Good use of the word tunic. You’ve got a few clauses in there, do you think some commas might help your audience to read the text clearly?
I have purple penned my work. Does it sound better?
The Ancient Greeks wore woollen fabric, it was hot almost all year so they wore loose light clothing. Rich people wore tunics that were brightly coloured and poor people had to wear all white. They wore leather sandals or boots on their feet. Ladies had to wear their tunics down to their ankles, they also wore their hair in plaits and wrapped them around their heads. Women liked to wear headbands made of metal or ribbon.
Yes, well done!
Men’s clothing was even simpler than woman’s. The most important piece of the clothing was a shorter version of the chiton (means shield),which was belted at the waist . At home people went without shoes,
but in the streets or when travelling people wore leather sandals.
Wow, great use of the word chiton (with brackets to explain it) and adverbials of place- at home, in the streets. Do you think you can add an introduction sentence to explain what you’re writing about? Or maybe a subtitle as a question?
4+7+15=26 10+14+8=32 26+32=58cm
The perimeter is 58cm
9+3 = 11 2.5+5.5=8 7.5+1.5=9 11+8+9=28m
The perimeter is 28m
16+19=35 35+8 3/4=43 3/4 43 3/4+16= 59 3/4 59 3/4+10 1/4=70
The perimeter is 70cm
Sorry I copied my working out wrong on number 2. It should be
9+8=17 2.5+7.5=10 5.5+1.5=7 17+10+7=34
The perimeter is 34m
Yes! Well done Lydia!
I have the same answer as you for 2 of them. Have a look at number 2 again. I’m not sure where you got the 3 from?
my answer for the maths was 100 and 3 quarters.
50 3 quarters add 21 add 29 =100 3 quarters
Declan, I’m not sure you’ve got this correct. Did you watch the video?
If we work out the missing sides of the first shape, the 2 horizontal sides are 8 and 7, and are parallel to the top, so the top is the same as them added together- 15
And the 2 vertical sides (4 and 10) are parallel to the right hand side, so that is 14.
If we add all those together – 15 + 14 + 8 + 10 + 7 + 4 = 58.
See if you can have another go at the other 2.
3) 55 and 3/4
Clothing in Ancient Greece consisted of lengths of rectangular or wool fabric. The Greeks wore light clothing as the climate was hot for most of the year There garment usually consisted of two main parts of a tunic -either a peplos or a chiton-and a cloak -himation-. … it was made of wool and had clasps at shoulders.
Great research and well written Declan. Just check which there their they’re you need for sentence 2. Your second sentence is a bit long, maybe if you put a full stop before the there…
Hi Mrs Leeming
This is my English work.
In ancient Greece the women would wear peplos. It was a large square piece of cloth. The chinton was a large piece of cloth. It was worn by men and women. At home the Greeks wouldn’t wear any shoes. Outside they would wear leather sandals.
Well done Jaynelle, instead of starting a new sentence for It was worn by men and women, could you use a relative clause and a comma.
piece of cloth, which was worn by men and women.
What do you think?
3)=61 and a quarter
I have the same results for one of the shapes. Can you send me your working so I can help you?
3) =70 the other 3) was a mistake
Yes 70 is correct for number 3. But you still need to work on number 2. Send me your working out.
Ancient Greeks used wool and linen to make clothes.Women wore a tunic (which in Ancient Greece they called a peplos)they also wore a chiton which everyone can wear. Men and women wore long ones all the children wore short chitons.Almost everyone were bare footed but some men or women had leather sandals.
Great work Dhanshri, I like the way you have used the correct words for the clothes and brackets!!!!
As you are writing in the past tense, could you change the can (which everyone can wear) to a could, which helps keep the tense correct?
I have purple pened my work is it better.
Ancient Greeks used wool and linen to make clothed. Women wore a tunic (which in ancient Greece they are called peplos)they also wore a chiton which everyone could wear.Men and woman wore long ones and all the children wore short ones.Almost everyone were bare footed but some men and women wore leather sandals
There are several pieces of clothes that make up the clothing of ancient Greece.Those include himation,chiton,chlamys and peplos. There are 2 pieces of clothing that the men and women wear to cover their body.The undergarment includes the peplos or chiton then they draped the cloak it can be chlamys or himation. The clothes that they wore were usually homemade.It was made from wood fabric,rectangular lining with little sewing and cutting.When they wore it,it was secured with girdle,a belt,pins or clasps.
I like the list of clothing- but in your text next week it might help to have a diagram to show what each of these looked like…?
Well done Aamirat! I think you’re the first person to get them all correct on the first go.
MATHS 1) 15 (7+8) + 14 (4 +10)+10+7+4+8=58
Well done Dhanshri. all correct, and thank you for showing me your working out.
The Greeks wore light clothes as the climate was hot for most of the year. Their usually wore two main parts, a tunic (either a peplos or chiton) and a cloak (himation). Clothes were worn at clasps pins at the shoulder and belt, sash, or girdle at the waist. Women also wore clothing which was made from big square piece of linen or wool. They used pins in various places to hold it together. Unlike the men’s, the dresses always went down to the ankles.
Great work Zain, I love the brackets. I think the “their” in the second sentence might need changing to they, have a read through and see what you think.
1. I did 8+7=15 and that goes at the top and then you do 10+4=14 on the side that is missing.
The perimeter is 58cm
2. I did 9-1.5= 7.5 and that goes on the longer side so then I did 8-2.5=5.5 and that goes to the other side that’s missing.
3. So you do 16+19=35 then you do 35+8=43 then 3/4=43 3/4 43 3/4+16= 59 3/4 59 3/4+10 1/4=70
And the perimeter
Ive done all my wrighting on paper is there an email i could send all my work to please about ancient Greece clothing.
Ancient Greece Clothing
Clothing in Ancient Greece consisted of lengths of rectangular linen or wool fabric. The Greeks wore light clothes as the climate was hot for most of the year. There garment usually consisted of to main parts: a tunic (either a peplos or chiton) and a cloak (himation). Clothes were secured with ornamental claps or pins at the shoulder and belt , sash, or girdle at the waist . Length of clothing differed between men and women. Women clothing was to their ankles while men wore their robe to the knees.