24 thoughts on “Year 4 English Task 05/03/21

  • 5th March 2021 at 1:13 pm
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    after the storm had passed the house was left in a rumble outside the teared,ruined house the gigantic,Forked tree collapsed on the house like an astroid the pieces in the house was falling like tiny stars as the mirror was whating it was fading and cracking in the sun light

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:14 pm
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      Great job, Vitalie! Don’t forget your capital letters! 🙂

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:14 pm
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    In the morning, the house was different the shattered glass, wich had fallen from the windows lay still like a star in the sky. The roof was smashed and had a massive hole inside it. The door was creacking as the wind blew open and shut and nearly fell of the door step. While the large , broken tree was laying on top of the roof.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:17 pm
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      That’s lovely description Valerija.

      Thank you 🙂

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:21 pm
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    after the storm was gone, the house was ruined. the windows were all crashed and the roof was shattered. the tall tree was lying on the cracked road peacefully. a dusty chair was lying on the ground with splintered planks and collapsed bushes. the door was completely gone leaving a rectangle hole. there was a room that collapsed leaving black smoky dust on the ground. the fence was rusted lying on the ground with other broken items.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:22 pm
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      Good description of the house Karolina, don’t forget capital letters

      Thank you

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:21 pm
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    After the storm had passed ,than house was left in ruins. The dented, collapsed gate has been destroyed. It had been torn out the ground and the earth was scatterd . The forked, colossal tree has fallen. It was as broken as a smashed window .The roof was split into two .

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:25 pm
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      Great work Amrit, good description of the tree

      Well done Thank you

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:21 pm
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    Ater the storm had passed, a few days ago the house roof was dusty and brake full the layars are cracked and smelly by the splinters and rat are runing around The doors were with out window inside and it callapsed with a tree a door was like a peece of wood The tree was gigantik as a house it was callapsing as a door at a same time

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:36 pm
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      Thank you Dmitrijs, don’t forget to check your spellings.

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:22 pm
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    After the thunder was gone, the house was nearly fully destroyed all the beautiful , clean windows were popped out and turned into shattered pieces of glass. The huge , gigantic tree hit the roof like a meteor hit it. The next day , the fence totally got smashed by the sparkly, dangerous storm. The dusty, ancient blinds fell on the floor because the wind blew it on the floor.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:35 pm
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      Well done Maja, what great describing words

      Thank you

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:27 pm
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    The next day, the storm had calm and everything was scattered around the deserted land. All the houses were collapsed and all trees were shredded into piece. it was like the past when a meteor hit the dinosaurs. There was a tornado which sucked all of the shattered pieces it was like a windy beach.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:34 pm
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      Great description

      Thank you Jaedon

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:30 pm
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    After the storm had passed, the house was left in total destruction. Also, the collosal, massive thin tree tipped over like a piece of paper blown in the wind. The tiles fell off like it came down on a slide.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:32 pm
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      Thank you for your description Khymari

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:31 pm
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    After the storm had passed, the house was left in ruins. An enormous, gigantic, no, GIGANTONOURMOUS tree had fallen and absolutely crushed the roof as if it were a cake.

    The glass windows were totally shattered, and the see-through splinters had been scattered across the floors like splintery stars in the night sky. The glass in the door had been broken as well, and was cracked, spiked, and messed up all around the doorway.

    The storm had really flooded the backyard. Roof tiles were everywhere, and plants were drooping. Almost every flower, weed, shrub, and leaf was drowned.

    Inside honestly could not be any worse. There was a huge hole in the floor, and everything had been destroyed. Wires, wood and glass covered the floor.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:58 pm
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      Great job, Jessica! 🙂

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:34 pm
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    After the storm had passed, the house has almost collapsed and got broken. The window was glistening across the floor and shattered. But the fence was everywhere near the house and broken and the wood was broken too. The house was broken because the tree which was brown fell onto the house because of the storm.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:56 pm
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      Thank you Ryan
      Well done

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:37 pm
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    After the storm had passed, the house was left in destruction. The collapsed, gigantic, damaged tree had destroyed the whole house. When the roof was destroyed the bricks smashed the glass which scattered across the floor and glistened like a shooting start times thirty. The door creaked as the wind blew it open and shut.

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:56 pm
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      Good choice of words Leon

      Thank you

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  • 5th March 2021 at 1:38 pm
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    After the storm whisked away, the place was looking like the inside of a trash can. The roof tiles slowly slid and flew to the ground and crashed. The place smelled like a dusty, smelly bean can. The glass was shattered out on the ground like sparkles. The trees slowly started kneeling as if they are about to drop. Flies were attracted. The furniture trapped, on its side or in pieces. The door as left deserted and started to sway in the wind a bit . The mossy bricks dropped down like they fainted , witch were hard to doge .
    The kitchen drawers where left in states with cracks the little doors of the drawer where out of there hinges like wild racoon looking for food

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    • 5th March 2021 at 1:55 pm
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      Well done Emilija

      Thank you

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