Tuesday 5th May 2020 – Writing planning Task

Morning Year 4,

I am sure you would agree that Captain Tom Moore has been an inspiration to all of us. We know he has inspired us, as teachers for not only raising money for NHS but the important part he played in World War II. What an amazing man!

So, who inspires you? It can be someone famous or someone you know (an adult).

Here is some questions to help you plan a biography about your inspirational person. Remember this is just a plan. You can use the headings and questions to make notes and add to the comments on this task or you can email a photo to yearfour@lingsprimary.org.uk.

My Biography of ________________________

Introduction

What is the full name of the inspirational person you are writing about?

Why have you chosen them? Keep it brief you will go into more details later.

Early Life

Write down three interesting facts about their childhood? Where and when were they born?

Family Life

Did they have children?

Did they get married?

How did they feel about growing up? you may find a quote or if you know them ask them (use inverted commas)

Did they have any hobbies?

Achievements/ Career

Write down 5 things that they have achieved/ been successful in. Include dates and places if you can.

What makes them special?

How did they feel about their achievements? you may find a quote or if you know them ask them (use inverted commas)

Conclusion

How will they remembered or what have they planned for the future?

 

Hope this plan helps. Look forward to reading them soon.

Mrs Denny. Mrs Baldry and Miss Bishop

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

9 thoughts on “Tuesday 5th May 2020 – Writing planning Task

  • 5th May 2020 at 11:01 am
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    Captain Tom
    Did he have children? yes he had 1 child a daughter
    Did he get married ? yes
    How did he grow up ?I infer he had a good and happy child hood
    What are his hobby’s? his hobby’s are watching game show and motor bikes
    What are his achievements ?walking at 100 and surviving at 100 also riding a plane

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    • 5th May 2020 at 2:24 pm
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      Remember this is a plan Chloe and you will need more details to help your write a biography tomorrow.

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  • 5th May 2020 at 11:02 am
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    Captain Tom
    Did he have children? yes he had 1 child a daughter
    Did he get married ? yes
    How did he grow up ?I infer he had a good and happy child hood
    What are his hobby’s? his hobby’s are watching game show and motor bikes
    What are his achievements ?walking at 100 and surviving at 100 also riding a plane

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  • 5th May 2020 at 11:32 am
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    Tom Moore.
    I chose him because he is famous.
    30/06/1920.
    His parents were local builders, He attended at Keighley Grammar School, Was a Civil Engineer.
    He is married.
    He has two children.
    His hobby is motorcross riding.
    War, motorcross, laps around his garden, being a 100 years old and being a fundraiser.
    Raising thirty-three and half a million pounds.
    Helpful.
    He will be remembered for raising money on NHS.

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  • 5th May 2020 at 11:57 am
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    Introduction

    What is the full name of the inspirational person you are writing about?
    Mahatma Mohandas Karamchand Ghandi

    Why have you chosen them?
    Reason I have chosen him because of his inspirational work and his contribution to the society in early 19th Century.

    Early Life
    Write down three interesting facts about their childhood? Where and when were they born?

    He was born in Porbandar, India.
    He was born on 2nd October 1869.
    During his childhood Ghandi was shy with no interest in games
    His Mom said the last words which was stay safe.
    His first marriage was at the age of 14.

    Family Life

    Did they have children?
    Yes, he had three children’s.

    Did he get married?
    During his life he married four times. His first two wives died young.

    How did he feel about growing up? you may find a quote or if you know them ask them (use inverted commas)
    “The future depends on what you do today.”

    Did they have any hobbies?
    His hobbies were practising law and helping poor’s.

    Achievements/ Career

    Write down 5 things that they have achieved/ been successful in. Include dates and places if you can.
    He fought against racial discrimination in South Africa.
    His Satyagraha campaign in SA led to the 1914 Indian Relief Act.
    He won first battle of Civil Disobedience in India at campaign.
    He successfully led to non-violent Tax revolt in Kheda, India.
    He led the popular non-cooperation movement in 1920’s.
    He lived in South Africa for 20 years.

    What makes him special?
    Because he made lots of contribution to the freedom movement of India.

    How did they feel about their achievements? you may find a quote or if you know them ask them (use inverted commas)
    “Be the change that you wish to see in the world.”

    Conclusion

    How will they remembered or what have they planned for the future?
    He will be remembered for contributions he made to the society.

    Did you know?
    He was a popular lawyer
    And practised to be a lawyer in South Africa for 20 years then went back to India because he got treated badly in South Africa.

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  • 5th May 2020 at 3:17 pm
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    My biography of Bear Grylls
    His full name is Edward Michael Grylls
    I chose Bear Grylls as he’s inspired me about surviving in the wild

    Bear grylls was born in London on the 7th June 1974.
    In 1982 bear Grylls joined scouts.
    In 1987 he joined the special air service.

    He had 3 children.
    He married someone called Shara

    One of his achievement’s was climbing mt.Everest.
    Crossing the north Atlantic ocean.
    Journey’s to Antarctica.
    Longest indoor free fall
    And paramotoring over the Himalayas.

    He remembered his tough travels.

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  • 5th May 2020 at 4:00 pm
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    My Biography of _____Cristiano Ronaldo ___________________
    Introduction
    His full name is Cristiano Ronaldo dos Santos Aveiro.
    He is one of the most famous soccer players in the world and he is my inspiration.
    Early Life
    Ronaldo was born on February 5, 1985 in Funchal, Madeira, Portugal.
    He was named Ronaldo after the then US President Ronald Reagan.
    He grew up in a poor family.
    He started playing soccer when he was eight years old.
    Family Life
    He has got four children. He is not married, but he has got a partner.
    Hobby
    He likes fashion and shopping.
    Achievements
    He has won the FIFA world player of the year award, Ballon d’Or, the Golden Boot, and has been named the UEFA Club Forward of the Year as well.
    He also has a fashion boutique named CR7 and models for men’s fashion wear.
    He is involved with charity, fund raising and donations to NGOs. He has funded schools in Gaza and acts as the Ambassador to Save the Children and The Mangrove Care Forum in Indonesia.
    What makes them special?
    Ronaldo proved that you can success in life and your dreams can come through if you work hard to achieve it.
    Ronaldo is a player who continuously surprises with changing his game style and he is still one of the best football players in the world.
    Conclusion
    His life motto is “Life is not always about football”. He admitted: “When I was young I had the dream of having my own hotel.” He invests in Pestana CR7 hotels.

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  • 6th May 2020 at 12:27 pm
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    My Biography of Monty

    Introduction
    The full name of the celebrity is Monty happiness.
    I have chosen the celebrity because it has the same birthday as me.

    Early life
    the celebrity is born on December 1st 2010.
    Monty was born in the united states.
    He was bought in the animal shelter (he is a cat) by a couple.
    He has OCD (obsessive compulsive disorder)

    Family life
    he didn’t have children.
    He wasn’t married.
    He felt calm growing up.
    No he doesn’t have any hobbies.

    Achievements/careers
    Monty has achieved dealing with OCD.
    Monty has achieved having a good life
    Monty has achieved his parents for taking good care of him.
    Monty achieved growing up.
    Monty has achieved life.
    His OCD is special because if he has OCD he is still cute and pretty.
    He felt happy about his achievements.

    Conclusion
    He hasn’t planned anything for the future yet.

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  • 8th May 2020 at 3:08 pm
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    Mum – Anjilina Soni
    The reason i have chosen my mummy, is because she works very hard to put things together. Mummy looks after the financial situations, she looks after my brother and me. my mummy makes sure that the clothes are washed for the family. Mummy helps me with my home work and when things go wrong with the computer.

    EARLY LIFE
    – Mummy comes from London.
    – My mummy worked in the Police for 10 years.
    – My mummy’s inspiration was her daddy because he worked very hard as
    a lorry driver.

    FAMILY LIFE
    Yes – my self and my brother Zion and 2 step children Jordan (25) Trinity (17).
    – No.
    When my mummy was growing up, her parents were very strict.
    My mummy likes clothes shopping.

    ACHIEVEMENTS/ CARER
    – 10 years in the Police.
    – Becoming a lorry driver.
    – Working in a special needs school.
    – She cared for her dad.
    – My mum survived in hospital with my brother for a month.

    what makes them special is the high level they have Achieved.
    – What makes my mummy special, she has achieved all her goals that she wanted to do. My mummy is an inspiration to me and my brother and i want to be like my mummy.

    CONCLUSION
    My mum has a very good memory and she wants to stay in the school for 10 years or more.

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