Tuesday 28th April 2020 – Writing planning task.
Morning Year 4,
After the lovely weather we had last week it would be great to brighten up our day by planning a poem. It definitely made me feel better enjoying the sunshine. I have attached a planner, use the headings to write ideas in the comments or hand write and email to yearfour@lingsprimary.org.uk
Try and use a couple of examples for each heading to plan your poem.
Look forward to seeing your plans later,
Mrs Denny, Mrs Baldry and Miss Bishop
The bee that I see…..
The Bee that I see, landed on the fence which was dense……
1. Fence, dense
2. Matt, sat
3. Cat, fat
4. Lime leaves
5. Flowing
6. Gliding
7. Amazing
8. Strongly
9. Whoosh
10. Explode
11. Loud as a lion’s roar
12. Strong as a T-rex
13. The bee was a stinging monster
14. The bee sat with an angry fur.
15. The grass waved its hands throughout the wind.
16. The leaves flied for their self in Autumn.
(This was purely Hargun’s compilation)
Nouns:
Nature, Oak tree, Maple tree, red kite, grass, foxes, raindrops, Earth, plants, squirrels, sticks, owls
Verbs:
gliding, raising, singing, saving, flows
Alliteration:
Ducks dig deep down, poppy platypuses pick prickly pineapples, fiddly flopping fish
Adjectives:
awesome, beautiful, delightful, outstanding, extraordinary
Adverbs:
quietly, eagerly, cheerfully, naturally
Onomatopoeia:
growl, whizz, swoosh, hoot
Similes:
as, like, resembles, or than
Metaphors:
Sky is a vibrant silk, emerald green leaves,
Personification:
Red kites dancing in the distance.
Foxes yapping to each other.
1.
Dog,fence,cat,house, man,gun,plates and lights
2.
Running, shooting , banging, swinging, crashing, smashing and falling
3.
Falling plates,guns firing and swinging light’s
4.
Beautiful,dirty,ancient and outstanding
5.
Quickly,suspiciously and angrily.
6.
bark,hiss,meow and growl
7.
blown,up,tree and head
8.
Mind is nuclear,lights are swings
9.
dogs and cats singing, man yelling in the distance
My Poem On Feeling Happiness
I woke up this morning, thinking of what the day will bring
and I looked a cross my room and saw the sun shining through.
i jumped out of bed to gaze at the sky, be hold i saw a beautiful blue sky.
i was so exited that i ran down stairs, opened the back door and to my surprise i saw a brightly colored butterfly.
With the sun shinening on me, i walked around my garden i am feeling realy happy to be there. i saw my flowers looking at me, so i continued to look around with, a smile on my face.
by Brooke Foster.